2023届高三英语写作专项:读后续写—A Gift for Grandpa 课件(24张PPT)

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2023届高三英语写作专项:读后续写—A Gift for Grandpa 课件(24张PPT)

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A Gift for Grandpa
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents' eagerly. On the way,the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway,at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa,we are back!”
Seeing his grandsons,Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain.A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn't stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can!” Certainly,he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation,went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees,birds, lizards,lots of bugs... How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn't get up. This made them worried. “We'd think out a way to cheer him up.” Jack said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack's mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”
Activity 1 : Read for Theme and six elements
Theme
When
Where
Who
What
Why
Love from kids
Summer vacation
Grandparents' house
the forest behind the property
Grandpa & Grandsons: Jack and Berilin
Jack and Berlin wanted to make a cane for Grandpa
to cheer Grandpa up
How
make a cane out of a young tree
Activity 2 : Read for Plots and Emotions 情节 & 情感
beginning
exposition
climax
end
resolution
development
excited
The Grandsons visited Grandpa
in Summer vacation
Grandpa tried to get up but in vain
joyful but
helpless
Grandsons went out into the forest and recalled merry moments with Grandpa
merry but
worried
Grandsons thought out a way to cheer Grandpa up --- make a cane out of a young tree
inspired
Berlin thought it was a good idea.
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.


Activity 3 : Read for Conflict 矛盾
What is the problem to be solved in the story
Grandsons
1. How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom
2. This made them worried
Grandpa
1. his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn't stand up on his own forever
2. helpless
3. Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地),“I can!
think out a way to cheer him up
Activity 4 : Read for Character Analyst 人物性格分析
Grandpa
Grandsons
loving
determined
exploring
nature-loving
wise
loving
devoted / filial
creative
considerate
Activity 5 : Study the given sentences
Para 1:Berlin thought it was a good idea.
Para 2:Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
两框首句定一框
二框二首正能量
Grandsons managed to make a cane out of a young tree
Grandpa cheered up
Para 2:Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
Activity 6 : Raising the questions 问题链
01
02
03
衔接句 1. What did they do to set about making a cane
情节推进: How did they cooperate with each other during the
process
衔接句 2:Having made a cane, how did they feel and where
did they hand it to Grandpa
Then a bright idea came to Jack's mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”
Para 1:Berlin thought it was a good idea.
01
03
结尾:Did they successfully cheer Grandpa up
Activity 6 : Raising the questions 问题链
衔接句 3: How did Grandpa respond (feeling
words action )
情节推进: What did Grandpa do with the cane
Para 2:Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
02
Activity 7 : Read for Writing Points 寻找续写点
A GIFT FOR GRANDPA
Summer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.
The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents' eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.
A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.
Grandpa had fun with them
in the forest agian
Activity 7 : Read for Writing Points 寻找续写点
Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”
Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldn't stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.
Grandpa stood up with the support of the cane
Activity 7 : Read for Writing Points 寻找续写点
The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs... How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!
But now Grandpa couldn't get up. This made them worried. “We'd think out a way to cheer him up.” Jack said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Jack shook his head.
Then a bright idea came to Jack's mind. “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”.
Grandpa explored the forest with them
Activity 8 : Writing Materials
1. 杰克和他的兄弟柏林一想到要再次去看望祖父母就兴奋不已。
2. 在路上,兄弟俩兴高采烈地谈论着他们和祖父母在一起的乐趣。
期待与兴奋
表情与性格
1. 他脸上闪现出无助的表情。
2. 但爷爷固执地宣称(倔强地),“我能!”当然,他这是耍孩子气。
Para 1
Para 2
Para 5
Para 5
Activity 8 : Writing Materials
1. 杰克和柏林都给了奶奶一个大大的拥抱,然后冲到客厅,兴奋地喊道:“爷爷,我们回来了!”
2. 看到孙子们,爷爷欣喜若狂。
3. 妈妈和祖父母很高兴在很长一段时间后再次见面。
亲人见面与高兴
Para 4
Para 5
Para 5
Activity 8 : Writing Materials
场景描写(倒装句衔接\比喻)
1. 终于出现了一座带白色烟囱的蓝色小房子。房子后面是森林,承载着他们和爷爷的美好回忆。
2. 他们来到了家门前的车道上,在尽头,奶奶正高兴地等着他们。
3. 高大的树木直插云霄,巨大的树枝相互交叉,而年幼的树木则像士兵一样笔直地矗立着。
4. 树,鸟,蜥蜴,很多虫子。。。他们和爷爷在这片王国里度过了多少欢乐时光!
Para 3
Para 6
Para 6
Para 3
Activity 8 : Writing Materials
1. 当他们选择了一棵中等大小的小树时,他们就把它砍倒,然后用刀砍掉树枝和皮。
The moment they ______ a young tree of moderate size, they ____________ and then __________________________ with a knife.
2. 为了让把手感觉舒适,他们用软布包了起来
To make the handle feel comfortable, they ______________
______ around it.
制作拐杖小情节
chose
cut it down
removed the branches and skins
wrapped a soft cloth
Activity 8 : Writing Materials
看着那根花哨的拐杖,爷爷高兴极了,脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。他满怀深情地感谢孙子们的礼物
Staring at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy ________
________________________________. He thanked his grandsons for the wonderful gift _____________.
收到礼物与高兴
with smiles on his face shining like a diamond
with affection
Activity 9 : Write the ending
Para 1:Berlin thought it was a good idea.
Para 2:Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
Samples 1
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They set about making a cane for Grandpa immediately. The moment they chose a young tree of moderate size, they cut it down and then removed the branches and skins with a knife. With a small wood fastened on the top as a handle, a fashionable cane came into being. To make the handle feel comfortable, they wrapped a soft cloth around it. Berlin, full of innovative ideas, carved words Gift To Grandpa on the cane. What a cool cane!
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. Staring at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy with smiles on his face shining like a diamond. He thanked his grandsons for the wonderful gift with affection, “You brothers are really great creators!” Supporting himself with the cane, Grandpa couldn't contain himself and went to the forest step by step. Watching the trees and grass around,he emotionally said he would forever cherish the fond moments they were together in the forest.
Samples 1
Berlin thought it was a good idea. They set about making a cane for Grandpa immediately. The moment they chose a young tree of moderate size, they cut it down and then removed the branches and skins with a knife. With a small wood fastened on the top as a handle, a fashionable cane came into being. To make the handle feel comfortable, they wrapped a soft cloth around it. Berlin, full of innovative ideas, carved words Gift To Grandpa on the cane. What a cool cane!
制作拐杖的动作链
with复合结构表伴随
Samples 1
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. Staring at the fancy cane, Grandpa was so happy with smiles on his face shining like a diamond. He thanked his grandsons for the wonderful gift with affection, “You brothers are really great creators!” Supporting himself with the cane, Grandpa couldn't contain himself and went to the forest step by step. Watching the trees and grass around,he emotionally said he would forever cherish the fond moments they were together in the forest.
高兴的心理描写
拐杖发挥作用,爷爷来到森林
场景复现,共同回忆甜蜜时刻
Samples 2
Berlin thought it was a good idea. With the tools fetched from the bakdyard, they returned to the forest to search for an approriate young tree for a cane. Hardly had they selected one when they get started with their BIG PROJET. Jack, the elder brother, took on the job of cutting it down, while Berlin, who was younger and more creative, was responbile for decoration. Hard as it might seem to them, they never failed to make it. After what seemed a long time, an elegant and tough cane appeared. Both of them were more than satisfied with their work and couldn't wait to rush home.
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. The instant he saw it, he knew what it was all about. Deeply touched by the grandsons' gift, he took it with great excitement and knocked on the ground several times. Obviously, he attempted to stand up with it. With the encouragement of the two brothers, he struggled to get up, rooted on the ground like a determined soldier. A cheerful and joyful expression, which Jack and Berlin had expected of their Grandpa, flashed on his face.It was at that moment that they literally felt all the efforts to make the cane were all worth it.
Samples 2
Berlin thought it was a good idea. (衔接句1)With the tools fetched from the bakdyard, they returned to the forest to search for an approriate young tree for a cane. (准备工作)情节发展:Hardly had they selected one when they get started with their BIG PROJET.(迫切的心情) Jack, the elder brother, took on the job of cutting it down, while Berlin, who was younger and more creative, was responbile for decoration. (分工合作)Hard as it might seem to them, they never failed to make it. (困难但不放弃)After what seemed a long time, an elegant and tough cane appeared.(成功) (衔接句2)Both of them were more than satisfied with their work and couldn't wait to rush home.(冲到家+递给爷爷)
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.
Samples
Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. (衔接句3)The instant he saw it, he knew what it was all about. (递+看到+知道一切)
情节发展:Deeply touched by the grandsons' gift, he took it with great excitement(语言协同心理描写) and knocked on the ground several times. (感动+激动+接过+试用)Obviously, he attempted to stand up with it.(拐杖应发挥作用+试图站立) With the encouragement of the two brothers, he struggled to get up, rooted on the ground like a determined soldier(鼓励+站立+修辞协同,比喻突出性格).
结尾句 :A cheerful and joyful expression(语言协同心理描写), which Jack and Berlin had expected of their Grandpa , flashed on his face.(冲突解决)升华:It was at that moment that they literally felt all the efforts to make the cane were all worth it.

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